Tuesday, December 14, 2010

* snippet *

I wrote 16 pages of a scene that happens a little bit later on in Freaky Temptation 2. This is a snippet of that scene. It took me about 6 days to write because of interruptions, distractions and... well, I kinda wanted it just right. It had to have the right feel.

Names have been taken away because there are surprises. So no one knows who this is. Can anyone guess?? Those that know.. SHUSH! ;)


They went at each other like old lovers that had been jailed for ten years and just released. Their tongues battled for space between their mouths. At one point, he tried to pull away but she lunged at him, biting his lip; a warning to him to never pull away from her again. She moaned into his mouth and he returned the vocal sentiment.
His hands left her hair and eventually made their way down the sides of her body. When he reached her waist, he brought his hands in between their bodies and felt up her stomach and stopped right under her breasts. Her chiffon dress blew in the wind of the moving ship and he felt her shudder.
Kissing her jaw as his hands moved upward, he felt her fall into him once again, pushing herself into him; wanting to be closer to him than she already was. When his hands finally ended their painstakingly slow journey to her tits, she threw her head back and moaned.
After giving her a soft and gentle squeeze, he moved his hands to the back of the dress to undo the zipper. She groaned in protest.
“You’re going to have to wait for more than that,” he whispered in her ear; his breath causing goose bumps to erupt all over her body.

2 comments:

Aunt Jenni said...

I was wondering where the names went....*giggle*

*TwistedMacSista* said...

Very nice ;)

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