Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Just a preview for those that are currently reading FT2

Wanted to share what I was writing. A little snippet. 
She stayed. Why? She knew why. It was a major turn on, that’s why. Seeing Preston take off this woman’s pants the way he did; she would have never thought she could ache for him. Not even when they were together did she ever feel the ultimate need to be with him. But feeling that familiar sensation, a deep, pulsating yearning, she wished that it were her he was undressing.
Later, Gators.

4 comments:

Aunt Jenni said...

Damn that Layla!! I knew it was gonna get good when Preston showed up.....Luv ya Feisty *muah*

deb's 'verse said...

Ha! Mistress has entered the room, cracked her whip and said: "NO MORE!" lmao. That's a
TEASE(R)if I've ever seen one! YAY! AAAAAAND.... h o l y crap! Simply awesome.

deb's 'verse said...

should i have posted my long comment on here bout where the story was goin? sorry. . am hopped up on coca-cola..started rambling there.

macfeisty said...

@deb's 'verse

no! that's fine. if i post on the board, comment on there. this is just a little extra place for people to come and read updates on where i'm at in the writing process and stuff like that.

not all the readers are on the board.. so i figured this was a place where other people could see what other people were saying about the updates. :)

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